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Logic 1 · 03-07-2010, 08:07 PM

no problem, i'd love for u to return the favor.. heres my newest text drop:

http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/tex...education.html

Itd be appreciated if u could feed if u get a chance and anyone that sees this =]

Swayde · 03-07-2010, 09:12 PM

feed's on the way amigo

Dragon · 03-08-2010, 10:50 AM

"Life’s a dance battle and my only move is the moonwalk"

DAMN! Funny and deep all at once. Favorite line.
The entire drop was Felt, but that line was on another level.
The type the shows deep thought in addition to high skill.
Fresh.

Gray Sky Black Mourning · 03-08-2010, 06:21 PM

Swayde... I thought this was a nice drop. I thought it was written and structured with veteran's precision. Lyrically you had me engaged from the first paragraph. As mentioned above the moonwalk line was dope on many mediums.

I definitely don't want to say you fell off on the rest but for me but because your opening bars were so beautifully worded and constructed I was wanting... more than I got maybe? This reflects praise for your opener more than criticism of the rest as from start to finish I still found this to be a refreshing journey.

In summary... do you bruh. You have something to say and you know how to say it.

Stay up.

Swayde · 03-08-2010, 08:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dragon

"Life’s a dance battle and my only move is the moonwalk"

DAMN! Funny and deep all at once. Favorite line.
The entire drop was Felt, but that line was on another level.
The type the shows deep thought in addition to high skill.
Fresh.

that line was the first line i came up with actually so that whole first section was like a set up to it....and thanks for the feed i'll try to keep it at a higher level as i go through thnx for the feed yall

**Nietzsche** · 03-08-2010, 10:13 PM

Another good key.

Quote:

Low self esteem is a danger to the mind

That was my favorite line. Good topic overall, you broke it down, made it easy to relate to. Just good work overall, you can definitely write. Glad you came by and dropped it, made it interesting to read, good concepts and ideas. Philosophical to say the least. Keep it up Swayde, really good work here.

Swayde · 03-09-2010, 05:41 PM

thnx man...yea this piece is on a couple sites but only this one gives me feed regularly so i'll stick around for a while haha

03-07-2010, 08:07 PM	#11 (permalink)
Logic 1 Assassin Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Strong Island, N.Y. Posts: 3,829 Credits: 0 Tournament Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Rep Power: 7 Wins: 4 Losses: 1	no problem, i'd love for u to return the favor.. heres my newest text drop: http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/tex...education.html Itd be appreciated if u could feed if u get a chance and anyone that sees this =] __________________ Philosophers Of Hip Hop!!!

03-07-2010, 09:12 PM	#12 (permalink)
Swayde Yo....... Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 72 Credits: 0 Tournament Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Rep Power: 2 Wins: 0 Losses: 1	feed's on the way amigo __________________ ..I Just Am.. And You Know Our Crew Sig Owns

03-08-2010, 10:50 AM	#13 (permalink)
Dragon Unknown Talent Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Georgia Posts: 266 Credits: 0 Tournament Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 My Mood: Rep Power: 1 Wins: 3 Losses: 5	"Life’s a dance battle and my only move is the moonwalk" DAMN! Funny and deep all at once. Favorite line. The entire drop was Felt, but that line was on another level. The type the shows deep thought in addition to high skill. Fresh. __________________ Dragon Jai Cruise Creativity Is The Foundation Of Greatness. "As It Was Written, So It Began."

03-09-2010, 05:41 PM	#17 (permalink)
Swayde Yo....... Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 72 Credits: 0 Tournament Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Rep Power: 2 Wins: 0 Losses: 1	thnx man...yea this piece is on a couple sites but only this one gives me feed regularly so i'll stick around for a while haha __________________ ..I Just Am.. And You Know Our Crew Sig Owns

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03-08-2010, 06:21 PM	#14 (permalink)
Gray Sky Black Mourning Born Dope Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Paradise Lost Posts: 108 Credits: 0 Tournament Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 My Mood: Rep Power: 1 Wins: 0 Losses: 0	Swayde... I thought this was a nice drop. I thought it was written and structured with veteran's precision. Lyrically you had me engaged from the first paragraph. As mentioned above the moonwalk line was dope on many mediums. I definitely don't want to say you fell off on the rest but for me but because your opening bars were so beautifully worded and constructed I was wanting... more than I got maybe? This reflects praise for your opener more than criticism of the rest as from start to finish I still found this to be a refreshing journey. In summary... do you bruh. You have something to say and you know how to say it. Stay up.

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