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05-05-2009, 03:55 AM
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|  CALIFORNIA. http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/tex...city-poem.html http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/tex...-star-boy.html  Armies And New Tribes'll Feel A Calm Breeze In Ju-ly! Like Welcome To The Coast Of Palm Trees And Blue Skies! I'll Launch Beams & Shoot Guys! Youngens Holdin' Weight! Guns In Holsters Blaze! ... Comin' From The Golden State! Where No One's Safe! Lil' Birds'll Start To Grow Feathers! & Gang Members "Throw Up Signs" Like Marchin' Protesters! These Starvin' Broke Fellers Try To Hustle And Stay Real! But The Drugs'll Slay Still, While We Struggle To Pay Bills! The Sickest Flowin'! We're Not Smokin' If It Isn't Potent! Sixes Rollin'! And Triggas Blowin' By The Pacific Ocean! Yo, These Broke Fucks Rappin'll Have No Luck Clappin'! Cause We've Been Rich Since The Gold Rush Happened! Imma Shoot Gats, Rippin' Em'! Like Rude Ass Citizens! P H A X Is "All Over California" Like Chumash Indians! So Bombs Away Mate! I'll Never Be On Ya Gay Tapes! My Squad'll-Stay With Model-Babes In The Monterey Bay! Struggle For Pay!? We're Getting Ten Bundles A Day! Homie I'd Spray-Targets! Back When Dre-Started N.W.A.! In A Candy Red Low! Watch These Pansie's Get Smoked! While You're Still On Your "First Mission" Like San Diego!
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05-05-2009, 01:47 PM
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| Real feed please? SO CAL, BITCHES ;]
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05-07-2009, 04:35 PM
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| definetly feelin this piece these my favorite lines the whole thing was on point tho mma Shoot Gats, Rippin' Em'! Like Rude Ass Citizens! P H A X Is "All Over California" Like Chumash Indians! So Bombs Away Mate! I'll Never Be On Ya Gay Tapes! Homie I'd Spray-Targets! Back When Dre-Started N.W.A.! In A Candy Red Low! Watch These Pansie's Get Smoked! While You're Still On Your "First Mission" Like San Diego! |
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05-08-2009, 02:03 PM
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| AkA Jae Rockz  Join Date: May 2009 Location: Norwalk,Connecticut
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| def like this piece even tho its funny cuz ur style of writing is def east coast lol... but real good wordplay n the flow was on point |
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05-23-2009, 07:30 PM
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| Style of writing is East Coast? The multi-syllable-shit is WEST COAST my dude. This was definitely slept on.!.
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05-26-2009, 01:11 AM
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| lol ^^ This was good, I thought the flow, topic, everything was solid, liked the read, excellent key about california, you described it well, keep it up, liked reading this, would like to hear it as a audio too.
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