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09-06-2008, 11:36 PM
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| A Nobody Join Date: Sep 2008
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Rep Power: 0  |  Dreamicyde. Symbiotic cells of the Dreamicyde plague lurk in the nights Living rotted the fiends reside in the age, swirled in a fright Absorbing the dormant mind cells, a synapse returns broke Informing the morbid time-bell, the skin lapse burn to cope Dividing the tissue in a rhythm the viruses harmonize death Inviting the misuse of wishing so an iris liquefies the breath To water-down the lungs, drowning on goals left to achieve Slaughter crowns a love, downing the whole chest in siege Marching savagely to a wasteland of a collapsed mainframe Starting a battery to make sand in the entrapped sane-reign Armed with glass in chemical warfare, the pupils open a bit Harmed in a brass reticule, swords wear a futile closed slit The dilation induces the Dreamicyde effect. A rising nation to bear screams in the mess. The dream works wonders, pleasure unmatched by god life A seam to hurt the others measure the track of the odd strife A global phenomenon, a presence of divine stature, blissful To noble, the venom of heaven arrive in the pasture, missile Fire begins the trance, a graceful sweep of horror and evils Pile so even the ants make a hasty retreat as the night beetle Crawls through the surplus of veins and memories chained On walls and view the nervous tame while energy is stained Rainbow- The clouds bleed a velvet blanket and the pain is Gone, while crowds seep in a hellish making while sanest Men lie, with bloody pillows and the recurring nightmares A dead cry so lovely the willows dispersing a bright flair Die. And every night the pain overtakes their body, the plague A forerunner of insane invades the complex and strains Build a home, consuming the goals until its empty hope And all alone this is why Noah left with an empty boat… Feed please. I tried ...The Shadow... Last edited by Lithium; 09-07-2008 at 12:25 AM. Reason: Feed Links |
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09-07-2008, 12:11 AM
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| Assassin  Armless Invaders Champion!Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Strong Island, N.Y.
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Rep Power: 3 | U need two links of feed to get feed..
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09-07-2008, 03:17 PM
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| Untouchable Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Sicklerville NJ
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Rep Power: 0 | Wats with the napping? man u know the deal, dope written.
__________________   MY GALLERY <div align="center">Live with Envy...Die another mans Death</div> <div align="center">Gfx Battles</div> 4/4-3 Siike- 3-0 KO JOh- 3-0 KO Highbrid-3-0 KO Deuce- 3-0 KO losses:: Psy- 3-1 Con- 3-1 Chicago- 3-0 KO --- |
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09-08-2008, 08:50 AM
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| ...Massive Slaughter...  Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Reside.......
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Rep Power: 1 | This was very nice. I like the vocab a lot with some twisted concepts as well. The flow was in the mild range, but your imagery with the vocab grasped my attention moreover. Excellent drop man, keep writing.
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09-09-2008, 01:40 PM
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| Street Soldier Join Date: Jun 2008
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Rep Power: 0  | Just Vocab .. Not My Kind Of Key, But Props For The Effort .. It Was Cool For What It Is .. Flow Is Alright , Lyrics Were Alright (Probs With Vocab Here & There) .. Just Not Really My Kind Of Key, But Keep Write'N .. It Was Cool Though None The Less ..
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