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Old 10-28-2017, 09:29 PM   #1
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This isn't too bad. Not really a big deal, but the white bar at the tip top just looks odd. I'd probably just crop that out. The cards and look on that come off as appealing to me. But I think the text -- being as focused on the image as it is -- could use work. Looks a bit bland and doesn't fit with the look, in my opinion. I think if you can do something different with the text, you can make this into something pretty damn cool.
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Doesn't seem like an album cover to me, nothing tells me That's what this is. Not sure if the white strip at the top is neant to be there but throws your overall image off just a bit. Other than that I can say it does look nice, appealing for sure. Text could be used maybe a drop shadow or outer glow make it pop a little more. Although to me it doesn't look that a album cover but to me it does look like the graphic you see in like a slot machine that's blinking trying to get you to spend your money...pretty cool overall though. Oh and I do like the effect you put on the cards, that's real cool.
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I can see you put some time into this,. i don't see the point in the overuse of white. maybe you were trying to hide something, but I like the effects on the cards. I don't mind the choice of font just wish it was blended in better..good shit man.
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Old 11-04-2017, 06:23 PM   #5
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so....
a cover is generally square in size
i do like the text but the style of it doesnt
really go with the background
i dont care too much for the effect on the
cards without the effect if might blend a little
better..keep at it...
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Old 11-05-2017, 03:35 PM   #6
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wouldn't know this is an album cover from the looks of it looks more like a casino banner or something the texture on the text doesn't mix with the background but the bg looks dope. agreed about the white being too harsh on this one, tone it down some
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So yeah, like others have said:

The white bar at the top.
It needs to be square.
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Not sure how I feel about the 'cheesy' effect that makes all the cards look that funny way. Makes it feel like a little too much is going on.
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