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Old 03-08-2013, 12:42 AM   #1
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ok I designed this logo, anyone have any comments/suggestions? either critique or anything that could possibly make it better.



Planning to put this on a sweatshirt before my next show..
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Old 03-08-2013, 02:27 AM   #2
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Thats pretty creative concept. I like what you did with the I and how you made the letters with a 'dripping' effect. Though the distorted/eraser type font makes most the letters just look 'erased', perhaps make the 'dripping' more apparent. With the right colors and such you could make it look chocolate dipped or coffee dipped perhaps..idk. Good though.
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i like it.. but if you gonna use the mic as an I the letters should be more close together, because it looks a tad bit spaced out.. other than that, pretty dope logo
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thanks @Jim Glockz but its more of the city (Detroit) under the letters than the dripping effect, is it hard to see? lol

and yea Tana I did space the letters out a bit but it was for the reason, seemed to smushed with that mic in the middle
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This is pretty dope. The whole city-skyline showing at the bottom of the text is cool. It's clean.

What I suggest is changing the backwards "E". It feels a tad Eminemish.
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it's pretty decent, kinda plain if you ask me tho
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the skyline letter font looks dope, i think there's another font where the buildings are more defined. Besides the backwards E that Sini pointed out the only focal challenge I see here is the Mic, all the rest of the letters are a thick dark solid black and the mic is too light, if you're using photoshop maybe thickening the stroke around the mic or something idk I know there's a way to darken it to match the lettering but I just woke up late to go to work on my off day so apparantly I'm not thinking so clearly right now lol.
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Is that actually the Detroit skyline? If so, nice. If not, I would try to cutout the actual skyline and mask that in over the letters. I agree with Glockz that I don't like the erased letters, I think you're losing something by using a really bold in your face font but not utilizing the full boldness of it. You're softening the font and that reads as you're softening your name and thus you by extension.

I've never really been a big fan of replacing letters with graphics, I find that it makes the words harder to read. What major company logo really does that? I can't think of any off the top of my head, it's usually small businesses who can't afford professionals to design their logos that think it looks good. That said, I like the mic dropping into the measuring cup, but I might try moving that out in front of the word as more of an identity mark and reinstating the I into the name.

Also, I would try making the skyline a little bit larger across the bottoms of the letters on some of them. You can't do much with the E because any larger and it would look like a backwards F, but the K hardly looks like it has any city at all.
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That said, I like the mic dropping into the measuring cup, but I might try moving that out in front of the word as more of an identity mark and reinstating the I into the name.
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not sure what you mean by moving it on front of the word

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that's how the detroit skyline looks though, the buildings towards the right are the taller ones


I'm confused which direction you're learning towards though..are you for or against the skyline on the bottom of the letters?
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that's how the detroit skyline looks though, the buildings towards the right are the taller ones
That's unfortunate a little bit, but it's ok.

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For the skyline on the bottom of the letters.

Also, 1 final comment: A backwards E in the name of a rapper from Detroit? Really? I feel like that ship has sailed.
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