03-21-2013, 08:03 AM
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Is that actually the Detroit skyline? If so, nice. If not, I would try to cutout the actual skyline and mask that in over the letters. I agree with Glockz that I don't like the erased letters, I think you're losing something by using a really bold in your face font but not utilizing the full boldness of it. You're softening the font and that reads as you're softening your name and thus you by extension.
I've never really been a big fan of replacing letters with graphics, I find that it makes the words harder to read. What major company logo really does that? I can't think of any off the top of my head, it's usually small businesses who can't afford professionals to design their logos that think it looks good. That said, I like the mic dropping into the measuring cup, but I might try moving that out in front of the word as more of an identity mark and reinstating the I into the name.
Also, I would try making the skyline a little bit larger across the bottoms of the letters on some of them. You can't do much with the E because any larger and it would look like a backwards F, but the K hardly looks like it has any city at all.
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