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09-05-2008, 09:22 PM
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| Administrator  Join Date: Jul 2006
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Rep Power: 10  |  Imagery Vs. (1) Nietzsche [Nietzsche Wins Via KO Week 5] Check In's Due: Friday, September 12th 11:59 PM CST Verse's Due: Saturday, September 13th 11:59 CST House Rules Apply No Extensions Given 5 Bars Check-In ASAP
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09-06-2008, 10:59 PM
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__________________   MY GALLERY <div align="center">Live with Envy...Die another mans Death</div> <div align="center">Gfx Battles</div> 4/4-3 Siike- 3-0 KO JOh- 3-0 KO Highbrid-3-0 KO Deuce- 3-0 KO losses:: Psy- 3-1 Con- 3-1 Chicago- 3-0 KO --- |
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09-07-2008, 10:33 PM
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Rep Power: 0 | From his drop entitled "Qualities of a Dreamer" Quote:
Hell you named Alive for this League, its dead. Site shows Signs that its Weak.. You got the Qualites of a Dreamer, cuz months later we still wonder how u keep- Lights on a Week!// Provin u cant make change. So ya, believe u can soar u can fly- R. Kelly Yaself.. Dont Dwell on ya Wealth, cuz u tryin to make Sense of Pist On Objects and culdnt get- Carol Shelby to Help// And you starting a crew? Fuckin wit Impedent Homos.. Why u draw a blank in ya Orafice, n i gotta Ref U G more or so sorta like that Orlean Shit!.. "All Hope is Gone" so watch me Slip Knots on Nie's Neck knockin out his Game like a Chlorafin Hit!// Why even Bother with Rhymes, u callself Nietzsche but fuck if u a Scholar or Scribe... Seriously. Beat Me? How you plan ta Handle Imagery wen you alone cant Father ya Site!// Kick to the Nutz? Sche aint Configured with Such! Just another Transsexual Wigger to Suck.. So ya u can A-dress the Best, but closest u come to a real artist, Is wen u Pick up the Brush!//
__________________ MY GALLERY <div align="center">Live with Envy...Die another mans Death</div> <div align="center">Gfx Battles</div> 4/4-3 Siike- 3-0 KO JOh- 3-0 KO Highbrid-3-0 KO Deuce- 3-0 KO losses:: Psy- 3-1 Con- 3-1 Chicago- 3-0 KO --- | |
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09-12-2008, 09:15 PM
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| Administrator Join Date: Jul 2006
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Rep Power: 10 | so Watch me, bolt graph to death like lightning victim studies… (old name graphik) Complain, moan, All he does is bitch!, but he's probably just ovary acting… (over reacting) Time to stop this spitting, image! Without killing drew carey! ... (http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/7...de6d647ti2.jpg) the alive league is fine, without you in it, with that played shit? I'll own this drop, to foil! But I was just hoping for punch!, at least align by image, without the Photoshop tutorials.. (a line by image) My text it uh kill ease, graphic, without the med school handouts.. (Achilles graphic)
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09-12-2008, 09:48 PM
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Rep Power: 0 | Punches: Nietz Complexity: Im Multies: Im Metas: Nietz Entertainment: Nietz Creativity: Nietz Personals: Nietz Structure: Nietz Flow: Nietz Closer: Nietz Vote: Nietz Imagery was good but it was hard to follow the lines were a little long and the punches were diffucult to folloow, when Nietz were straight forward and explained.. that drew carey line was dope.. Nietz lines were shorter and straight to the point..
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09-15-2008, 10:10 AM
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| ...Massive Slaughter...  Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Reside.......
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Rep Power: 1 | I have to agree with Colin on this. I was suprised at your verse Imagery....anyhoo. Flow: Niet Multis:Image Wordplay: Image Punchlines: Niet Structure: Niet Complex: tie Personals: tie Creativity: Niet Opener:tie Closer: Niet Enjoyment: Both Overall: Niet just had more str8 to the point lines.
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09-15-2008, 07:31 PM
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| ..Mr.Phresh..  Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: PA - NY
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Rep Power: 1 | Punches: Nietz Complexity: Im Multies: Im Metas: Nietz Entertainment: Nietz Creativity: Nietz Personals: Nietz Structure: Nietz Flow: Both Closer: Both Vote: Nietz
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