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Old 03-19-2017, 02:32 AM   #11
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Old 03-22-2017, 03:35 PM   #13
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Yes, an extension is required. My verse is done, as you can see..

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hey man, sorry, forgot about this.

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So firm with intent he places his hands on each of his cheeks
discerned it prevents clarity manifesting & impeaching his speech
“why do we have to do this?” he trembled and smothered
Peter was 45, an aer of loneliness but a work friend of his mother’s
“It’s just what best friends do!” as he stroked through his hair
the boy couldn’t understand as peter left a nervous joke in the air

Time tic’s in a broken clock, as angst builds in the hope he’ll stop
secrets wrangled in a spoken knot, as on the inside he chokes and rots
Years pass disengaged, distracted, only one that remains attracted
a mind so drained, abstracted, tell me, how was he not afraid the captive?
Distorted, submissive in fashion, to his abuser he had an implicit compassion
the outside couldn’t listen or fathom, as logic goes the thing missing was ration

The sombre space, a cloudy mist
he balls his fingers around his fist
thoughts vocalised, aloud they twist
as the cold of steel ploughs his wrists
“Stop”
from the ledge he’s pulled
blade to skin the edge is stalled
tracks across his skin lead the way
the journey, everything he sees and says
deceived he prays to leave these ways
as a single drop he bleeds and fades

One Day

Then suddenly, out of the blue; he snaps from the core
tension, spills from the wound as he cracks on the door
Peter answers, as it opens he’s knocked back to the floor
the boy stands over him, Peter crawls, trapped on all fours
The final act is in course, scene’s set no props and at last a stage
“I cant take this anymore” screams the boy, his voice; rasped in rage


“What have I done” to his knees the boy drops and wilts
confused, so much anger yet stopped in guilt
cold and bemused a sadness quickly thickens and crusts
the concept is one that would sicken the guts
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