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Old 04-11-2017, 12:00 AM   #1
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KOTB III


Ness Vs. Kin.

Verse Length - One Bar

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Verses Due 4/17/17 by 11:59 PM Central.








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Complexity
- ( Criteria includes Rhyme Scheme, Flow,Double Punching, Effective Set Up. Voters do not have to cite all criteria; but should use all that helped them formulate their opinion, in their explanation for this section. )

Creativity ( The only criteria is to explain which concept(s) you found fresher. )

Punch Effectiveness ( Criteria included execution, humor, personal relevance, directness, and harshness. Voters do not have to cite all criteria, but should use all that helped formulated their opinion, in their explanation of the section.)



Winner faces the winner of Answer Vs. Bare Ryu Vs. Meta4ik to crown the King of the Bar, from my understanding of the Parking Lot concept. @Ness vs. @kin.
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Old 04-11-2017, 06:05 PM   #2
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Old 04-12-2017, 09:15 AM   #3
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@kin. Update change to this.

Ness opted for a disqualification win to advance. Thus a different opponent.

Moved due date to Monday because of change.
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Old 04-17-2017, 04:39 PM   #5
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here off a Disqualification W?? did Bare Ryu dirty wit' that!





Royalty Disgrace, an you Claim we Bout to See You King Bro?
How Dare-He, Queen Ness Proud of that DQ Win-Doh!
Schizo, Head Shot kill em' Quickly, Clip'll Drop n' ya Lid'll Blow
Leave his Brain Outside his Body like Lil' Dicky's Pillow Talk Video!!!
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Yo, pass the mic and I’ll gas it right, like I’m about to bake kin with the fire,
he must smoke that grass all night to think he deserves the crown & this empire
But we coulda been friends, shit we mighta even been kin, but when you matched up to me you became the B to my P, kin.
Slow it down”? I speed up while you break’n, he can’t even handle the force of a ‘Gso how can this fool be ‘kinG’?

Pass the mic- song he did with his group
BP- One of his friends who passed away.
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nobody is following the rules, this shit is on purpose, I could see it being one long bar.... like I would do ... but its not its clearly two rhymed bars put together ...

the rules exist for a reason... the last time I could believe that maybe it was a mistake and the other person wanted to keep it fair by matching, but this time I know ur doing it on purpose...

sorry if u dont like it, but its king of the bar, not bars ...
It looks more like it was mainly ness

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Infact it IS only ness who came with two bars. ... They are different rhymes from the start, kin ur shit just looks like more cuz the size and im on my phone at work, so ur shits cool, but ness... c'mon man
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Lol @ ling.... phone did that I ment to say just looks big....
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Yo, pass the mic and I’ll gas it right, like I’m about to bake kin with the fire,
he must smoke that grass all night to think he deserves the crown & this empire
But we coulda been friends, shit we mighta even been kin, but when you matched up to me you became the B to my P, kin.
“Slow it down”? I speed up while you break’n, he can’t even handle the force of a ‘G’ so how can this fool be ‘kinG’?

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Ness that was a great deal of multis and a series of Kin wordplay lines. The BP line was OD grimey, so kudos for that. Plus really slick rhyme pattern. This was a really solid showing here from you. The one bar was kinda extended so it was more like 2-3 bars but it was a great read.

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How Dare-He, Queen Ness Proud of that DQ Win-Doh!
Schizo, Head Shot kill em' Quickly, Clip'll Drop n' ya Lid'll Blow
Leave his Brain Outside his Body like Lil' Dicky's Pillow Talk Video!!!
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Damn Kin! I didn't expect that to be honest. The Dairy Queen line was really clever. You can tell that you do a great deal of audio music on a regular but the text from you is kinda tight bro. I really enjoyed it. Sounded better out loud than Ness' piece but im sure Ness could say that piece out loud and move us.

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