<b>[FIRE]</b>....On Creeks Nightfall.... - Rap Royalty

Graphik · 07-10-2008, 09:50 AM

Think i pressured myself and i aint Doing Well and its in da Music Felt..
I mean its True i Fell, Im Losing Cells (bars) not dat ones lost dat'll Ruin Health//
What am i Doing? Hell, If i knew den i could Plan an Move, My Plans r Screw'd..
No longer got a Hand on my Youth, dat fountains empty by fellow Man with Abuse//
Wats a Man gotta Do? Wait for Planets to Align? Ima Suicide, but no Handle on da Nine..
Pushing Anger to da Side, I would Hang myself Tonight, but ders nowhere to Dangle till i Die//
So im just a Bengal in dis Life, A Tiger in Oppression. Facing Fires, Whips, or Fences..
Feeling so Defenseless. Cuz my released prayers, dont reach god. Just go Higher in Succession//

So its Here that Life Halts. Sight is Ceased to my EyeBalls...
Cuz as a Writer Blocked. My Dam Flow just waits on Creeks Nightfall///

Graphik · 07-10-2008, 09:52 AM

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WillieChew · 07-10-2008, 01:37 PM

Dope Read ..

So im just a Bengal in dis Life, A Tiger in Oppression. Facing Fires, Whips, or Fences..
Feeling so Defenseless. Cuz my released prayers, dont reach god. Just go Higher in Succession

Favorite Lines Here

Good Read Though, Nice Multis Though Some Could Be Fixed Up, Good Details Make'N For A Nice Read .. Just Good Work In General, Key Is Fire

WHITE POWdER · 07-12-2008, 11:41 AM

Wish it were longer, but it's good, nice read man, good shit as usual. Nothing bad to really comment on

DiReCt HiT · 07-12-2008, 06:30 PM

THis was short n sweet.

pretty dope read.

multis were great.

So im just a Bengal in dis Life, A Tiger in Oppression. Facing Fires, Whips, or Fences..
Feeling so Defenseless. Cuz my released prayers, dont reach god. Just go Higher in Succession

^^ feeling that.

only thing you could work on is fix the structure up a bit. ya know?

lol but keep doing your thing

~return the favor

Screech Powers · 07-14-2008, 01:36 PM

Really enjoyed this piece. Rather short, but it gets the job done and that is what matters in the end. Nice read once again. Nothing really to leave feed on, it was just that good.

**Nietzsche** · 07-15-2008, 08:31 AM

I liked this drop man, it was deep, could feel a lot what you were saying. You've got this down, but I wish it were a little longer, but the end kind of made up for it. One of the better drops from you I've seen. Good work.

Logic 1 · 07-15-2008, 01:38 PM

Yea u pretty much kept it clean in every cat (Vocab, multies, metas, concept ect.)
Stayed consistent throughout and it was defenitley a deep heartfelt peice

Fav part
No longer got a Hand on my Youth, dat fountains empty by fellow Man with Abuse//
Wats a Man gotta Do? Wait for Planets to Align? Ima Suicide, but no Handle on da Nine..
Pushing Anger to da Side, I would Hang myself Tonight, but ders nowhere to Dangle till i Die//

dunno why ..it jus flowed dope to me

**Nietzsche** · 07-15-2008, 08:16 PM

Logic 1 · 07-20-2008, 07:26 PM

Congrats on the fire drop graph, u deserve it

07-10-2008, 09:50 AM	#1 (permalink)
Graphik Untouchable Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Sicklerville NJ Posts: 3,231 Rep Power: 0	Think i pressured myself and i aint Doing Well and its in da Music Felt.. I mean its True i Fell, Im Losing Cells (bars) not dat ones lost dat'll Ruin Health// What am i Doing? Hell, If i knew den i could Plan an Move, My Plans r Screw'd.. No longer got a Hand on my Youth, dat fountains empty by fellow Man with Abuse// Wats a Man gotta Do? Wait for Planets to Align? Ima Suicide, but no Handle on da Nine.. Pushing Anger to da Side, I would Hang myself Tonight, but ders nowhere to Dangle till i Die// So im just a Bengal in dis Life, A Tiger in Oppression. Facing Fires, Whips, or Fences.. Feeling so Defenseless. Cuz my released prayers, dont reach god. Just go Higher in Succession// So its Here that Life Halts. Sight is Ceased to my EyeBalls... Cuz as a Writer Blocked. My Dam Flow just waits on Creeks Nightfall/// __________________ MY GALLERY <div align="center">Live with Envy...Die another mans Death</div> <div align="center">Gfx Battles</div> 4/4-3 Siike- 3-0 KO JOh- 3-0 KO Highbrid-3-0 KO Deuce- 3-0 KO losses:: Psy- 3-1 Con- 3-1 Chicago- 3-0 KO ---

07-10-2008, 09:52 AM	#2 (permalink)
Graphik Untouchable Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Sicklerville NJ Posts: 3,231 Rep Power: 0	http://rap-royalty.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=18469 http://rap-royalty.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=18612 __________________ MY GALLERY <div align="center">Live with Envy...Die another mans Death</div> <div align="center">Gfx Battles</div> 4/4-3 Siike- 3-0 KO JOh- 3-0 KO Highbrid-3-0 KO Deuce- 3-0 KO losses:: Psy- 3-1 Con- 3-1 Chicago- 3-0 KO ---

07-10-2008, 01:37 PM	#3 (permalink)
WillieChew Street Soldier Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 186 Rep Power: 0	Dope Read .. So im just a Bengal in dis Life, A Tiger in Oppression. Facing Fires, Whips, or Fences.. Feeling so Defenseless. Cuz my released prayers, dont reach god. Just go Higher in Succession Favorite Lines Here Good Read Though, Nice Multis Though Some Could Be Fixed Up, Good Details Make'N For A Nice Read .. Just Good Work In General, Key Is Fire __________________ Yes .. I Will eat Chu

07-12-2008, 11:41 AM	#4 (permalink)
WHITE POWdER Assassin Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 2,265 Rep Power: 4	Wish it were longer, but it's good, nice read man, good shit as usual. Nothing bad to really comment on __________________

07-12-2008, 06:30 PM	#5 (permalink)
DiReCt HiT Street Soldier Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Jacksonville Florida Posts: 233 Rep Power: 0	THis was short n sweet. pretty dope read. multis were great. So im just a Bengal in dis Life, A Tiger in Oppression. Facing Fires, Whips, or Fences.. Feeling so Defenseless. Cuz my released prayers, dont reach god. Just go Higher in Succession ^^ feeling that. only thing you could work on is fix the structure up a bit. ya know? lol but keep doing your thing ~return the favor __________________ <div align="center"> </div> <div align="center"> </div> ---

07-14-2008, 01:36 PM	#6 (permalink)
Screech Powers Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Port Washington, Wisconsin Posts: 388 Rep Power: 2	Really enjoyed this piece. Rather short, but it gets the job done and that is what matters in the end. Nice read once again. Nothing really to leave feed on, it was just that good. __________________ Support my foundation: http://www.dustindiamondfoundation.com/ Also if you want my sex tape, Screeched aka Saved by the Smell, just PM me and we will discuss a price. I'm also selling shirts "I gave 15 dollars to help Screeech save his house" for 15-20 bucks, but for an extra $5 I will put my autograph on it. <div align="CENTER">Here lies the victims of Screech -Shadow Jihad (KO) -KidCharade ()</div>

07-15-2008, 08:31 AM	#7 (permalink)
Nietzsche Administrator Babycal Throw Champion! Ant Burner Champion! Castle Defender Champion! Boulder Crusher Champion! Caray Snake Champion! Battle Snake Champion! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 6,432 Rep Power: 10	I liked this drop man, it was deep, could feel a lot what you were saying. You've got this down, but I wish it were a little longer, but the end kind of made up for it. One of the better drops from you I've seen. Good work. __________________ Member of The Philosophers of Hip-Hop

07-15-2008, 01:38 PM	#8 (permalink)
Logic 1 Assassin Armless Invaders Champion! Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Strong Island, N.Y. Posts: 2,023 Rep Power: 4	Yea u pretty much kept it clean in every cat (Vocab, multies, metas, concept ect.) Stayed consistent throughout and it was defenitley a deep heartfelt peice Fav part No longer got a Hand on my Youth, dat fountains empty by fellow Man with Abuse// Wats a Man gotta Do? Wait for Planets to Align? Ima Suicide, but no Handle on da Nine.. Pushing Anger to da Side, I would Hang myself Tonight, but ders nowhere to Dangle till i Die// dunno why ..it jus flowed dope to me __________________ iDOMINATE

07-15-2008, 08:16 PM	#9 (permalink)
Nietzsche Administrator Babycal Throw Champion! Ant Burner Champion! Castle Defender Champion! Boulder Crusher Champion! Caray Snake Champion! Battle Snake Champion! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 6,432 Rep Power: 10	__________________ Member of The Philosophers of Hip-Hop

07-20-2008, 07:26 PM	#10 (permalink)
Logic 1 Assassin Armless Invaders Champion! Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Strong Island, N.Y. Posts: 2,023 Rep Power: 4	Congrats on the fire drop graph, u deserve it __________________ iDOMINATE

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