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11-07-2008, 10:41 PM
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| A Nobody  Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: PEI, Canada
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Rep Power: 0  |  Random. Heres a random rhyme I just threw together. Bitch you aint no perfection, when you look in the mirror you cant get a erection, you think thats sick wait till you see my reflection cause me, im da picture of perfection. would love to get pointers.
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11-08-2008, 10:53 PM
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| Assassin Join Date: Dec 2006
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Rep Power: 10  | break ur bars up..nobody wants to read long stretched sentences, break them up, keep them neat an eZ to read.. that said..fa a punch it really doesnt work..take a simple concept an build frum that..add creativity to it.. come up wit a concept..juss nethang..such as.."ill take u out"..an build off of that..tie it in wit watever u add on to it to make a punch..itll make mo sense when u try..dont give up tho..hit me up if u need help..
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