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02-08-2010, 02:25 AM
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| A Nobody Join Date: Feb 2010
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|  yo yo.. Ya presence has been a Blur, ..Ill finish ya Little Works, ..plus we aint 'Fuckin wit Young D's' Like sexual Pred-a-tors// Im dead'n ya brittle Worth,..ya flow is fuckin offesive!,..My verse is the 'Reverse time machine' ..Turnin Young to Infant"// ya Non Exist-ant,..so im breaking ya left jaw,..You 'Reppin Detoit'??!!... O so u must be the Tigers of Baseball// I Fire and Rape Bods,..you the Next on tha list,..I'll leave ya body Like ya Street Cred..it doesnt Exist!!// u trying to battle bitch?! you must be crazy u tweeked?,..i aint seen Detroit this Overhyped since Slim Shadys L.P// u hate that im me!,..homie Im Blazing your Speech!,..Battle Me? The 'Real question is Your Initials',... Y?..D// its highly un-likely,..that you'll try to survive my-heat,..slicing his I.V's,..while hes trying to die quietly// why would u try tryin me?,..Im Resilant Kid!..Sendin more 'Bullets to Young' then a 'INFANT'ry's Clips//... ..... |
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02-08-2010, 05:57 PM
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| A Nobody Join Date: Jan 2010
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| dude think he can spit, but never,like he suckin a dick he a choke-artist u a catcher, even ya girl no i throw-farthest, u like a broken mic ya so-garbage mic-chek , i might-stress but ya flow got no physique like a girl wit a flat-chest n no-ass ill get ya teeth crushed so ya punches bite-less n leave ya Flow-smashed like broke-glass he think he sweet like he eating smarties,blow ya stomach out,can u eat when u starving u aint show up like dis geek was tardy,no excuses cuz dis freak is sorry, cant wait to see da Jeri(jury) cuz im beatin dis case,like mike jackson beating the state my flow molest jericko he not fleeing dis rape,weak bladder so like r kells i pee in his face |
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02-09-2010, 03:06 PM
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| A Nobody Join Date: Feb 2010
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| Punches:jericko Complexity:jericko Multies:tie Metas:jericko Entertainment:jericko Creativity:jericko Personals:tie Structure:jericko Flow:jericko Closer:neither Vote: Jericko |
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02-10-2010, 04:53 PM
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| A Nobody Join Date: Feb 2010
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| Punches:jeri Complexity:jeri Multies:neither Metas:jeri Entertainment:jericko Creativity:jericko Personals:neither Structure:Y.D Flow:jericko Closer:neither Overall: Jeri Came hard More Complexity And Yung Just Was 2 Simple And Plain |
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02-10-2010, 11:32 PM
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| Vengance Never Dies Join Date: Feb 2010
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| trying to battle bitch?! you must be crazy u tweeked?,..i aint seen Detroit this Overhyped since Slim Shadys L.P// u hate that im me!,..homie Im Blazing your Speech!,..Battle Me? The 'Real question is Your Initials',... Y?..D// ^^ Ha that shit was funny .. its obvious the difference in skill here..Jeri had stronger punches & concepts ....decent flow through out..though iQuestion some of the wordplay :| & I'm pretty sureyou meant detroit not detoit haha as for Young Detroit You need to work on your wordplay & vocab everything else will fall into place..I really like your structure & multiple rhyme schemes within one line....very nice..you got mad potential..but over all ..this battle was one sided... Vote=Jericko
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