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Old 02-07-2010, 03:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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3-0 ko or first to five

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Old 02-07-2010, 03:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 02-07-2010, 03:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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murder murder...check..check
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Old 02-08-2010, 02:25 AM   #4 (permalink)
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yo yo..

Ya presence has been a Blur, ..Ill finish ya Little Works, ..plus we aint 'Fuckin wit Young D's' Like sexual Pred-a-tors//
Im dead'n ya brittle Worth,..ya flow is fuckin offesive!,..My verse is the 'Reverse time machine' ..Turnin Young to Infant"//
ya Non Exist-ant,..so im breaking ya left jaw,..You 'Reppin Detoit'??!!... O so u must be the Tigers of Baseball//
I Fire and Rape Bods,..you the Next on tha list,..I'll leave ya body Like ya Street Cred..it doesnt Exist!!//
u trying to battle bitch?! you must be crazy u tweeked?,..i aint seen Detroit this Overhyped since Slim Shadys L.P//
u hate that im me!,..homie Im Blazing your Speech!,..Battle Me? The 'Real question is Your Initials',... Y?..D//
its highly un-likely,..that you'll try to survive my-heat,..slicing his I.V's,..while hes trying to die quietly//
why would u try tryin me?,..Im Resilant Kid!..Sendin more 'Bullets to Young' then a 'INFANT'ry's Clips//...



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Old 02-08-2010, 05:57 PM   #5 (permalink)
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dude think he can spit, but never,like he suckin a dick he a choke-artist
u a catcher, even ya girl no i throw-farthest, u like a broken mic ya so-garbage

mic-chek , i might-stress but ya flow got no physique like a girl wit a flat-chest n no-ass
ill get ya teeth crushed so ya punches bite-less n leave ya Flow-smashed like broke-glass

he think he sweet like he eating smarties,blow ya stomach out,can u eat when u starving
u aint show up like dis geek was tardy,no excuses cuz dis freak is sorry,

cant wait to see da Jeri(jury) cuz im beatin dis case,like mike jackson beating the state
my flow molest jericko he not fleeing dis rape,weak bladder so like r kells i pee in his face
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Old 02-09-2010, 03:06 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Punches:jericko
Complexity:jericko
Multies:tie
Metas:jericko
Entertainment:jericko
Creativity:jericko
Personals:tie
Structure:jericko
Flow:jericko
Closer:neither
Vote: Jericko
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Old 02-10-2010, 04:53 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Punches:jeri
Complexity:jeri
Multies:neither
Metas:jeri
Entertainment:jericko
Creativity:jericko
Personals:neither
Structure:Y.D
Flow:jericko
Closer:neither
Overall: Jeri Came hard More Complexity And Yung Just Was 2 Simple And Plain
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yung detroit vs the ugly
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trying to battle bitch?! you must be crazy u tweeked?,..i aint seen Detroit this Overhyped since Slim Shadys L.P//
u hate that im me!,..homie Im Blazing your Speech!,..Battle Me? The 'Real question is Your Initials',... Y?..D//

^^ Ha that shit was funny ..

its obvious the difference in skill here..Jeri had stronger punches & concepts ....decent flow through out..though iQuestion some of the wordplay :| & I'm pretty sureyou meant detroit not detoit haha

as for Young Detroit

You need to work on your wordplay & vocab everything else will fall into place..I really like your structure & multiple rhyme schemes within one line....very nice..you got mad potential..but over all ..this battle was one sided...

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