KOS ..::Vs::.. ASP (ASP Wins, KO)

[Ah Swuh Pwn]

3 Bars ..
Due When Ever

lol @ personals P H A X .. did u even read that battle or did u just vote because his structure was nice and only read his verse? ..
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http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/tex...z-vs-ugly.html

[KingOfSparta]

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Vote Link: http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/vot...tml#post273202

[Ah Swuh Pwn]

You Got A Verse To Drop? .. No Doubt Its Bad!, And If He Thinks Ah Str8 Choked? Doubt This Lad
He Reminds Me Of `Trains Wit Another Engine As The Kaboose`, The Way He "Blow'n Smoke Out His Ass"
(If He Thinks ...........Ah Str8 Choked Out This Lad)


I Can Tell Your Style Played Out Like Barnie Fife, Probably An `Old Herb`.. Watch As This Little Dawgs `Barking Dies`
But The Truth Is, Nobody Even See's Him `Land Punches`, But Thats The `Natural Form` In `SparRing Fights`

Im The Manican Murker! .. I Kill Fakes, You Could Be Play'n Cards Wit Death .. And Still Would'nt Deal Fate
Your A Pizza Crap.. Imma Chuck E-Cheese At Him.. Cuz `KOS` Means Nothing To Me & Like Bill Gates

[KingOfSparta]

Since You Drop With "WEAK DEFENSES" I'll Leave Ya "TEXT IN ASHES" For Messing "WITH THIS MANSCRIPT" Cleaving Axes "IN YOUR CHEST THEN" Show You The Meaning Of Spartan's "Ripped Abs" When I Jump Rope *YOUR INTESTINES!*

Beware When "THE SWORDS CLASHES" Cause I'm Leaving "ALL HEADS BASHED IN", Now For Talking About Playing "CARDS IN VERSES" I'll Leave Your "CHEST IN GASHES" After I "Cut" Him Like Playing Spades *ON YOUR CHEST BITCH!*

Now It's Clear "I OWNED THIS LAME" With "A VERSE OF PAIN" Ya Deaths "SIMPLE AN PLAIN" Next Time Better Not "MENTION MY NAME" (K.O.S), But Now I'll Nail A "Shovel To Your Back" Then Knock You Down To Let You *DIG YOUR OWN GRAVE!*

[P H A X]

You Got A Verse To Drop? .. No Doubt Its Bad!, And If He Thinks Ah Str8 Choked? Doubt This Lad
He Reminds Me Of `Trains Wit Another Engine As The Kaboose`, The Way He "Blow'n Smoke Out His Ass"
-Eh. This was okay I guess, not really hitting that hard for me dude.-

I Can Tell Your Style Played Out Like Barnie Fife, Probably An `Old Herb`.. Watch As This Little Dawgs `Barking Dies`
But The Truth Is, Nobody Even See's Him `Land Punches`, But Thats The `Natural Form` In `SparRing Fights`
-This was pretty cool. Put together well with some word/nameplay.-

Im The Manican Murker! .. I Kill Fakes, You Could Be Play'n Cards Wit Death .. And Still Would'nt Deal Fate
Your A Pizza Crap.. Imma Chuck E-Cheese At Him.. Cuz `KOS` Means Nothing To Me & Like Bill Gates
-Hmmph. I don't know, some of this was confusing to me. But I see where you were going with it.-

Since You Drop With "WEAK DEFENSES" I'll Leave Ya "TEXT IN ASHES" For Messing "WITH THIS MANSCRIPT" Cleaving Axes "IN YOUR CHEST THEN" Show You The Meaning Of Spartan's "Ripped Abs" When I Jump Rope *YOUR INTESTINES!*
-This was a cool opener, but also wasn't hitting that hard for me.-

Beware When "THE SWORDS CLASHES" Cause I'm Leaving "ALL HEADS BASHED IN", Now For Talking About Playing "CARDS IN VERSES" I'll Leave Your "CHEST IN GASHES" After I "Cut" Him Like Playing Spades *ON YOUR CHEST BITCH!*
-I dont know, I felt like you could've done alot more with this bar. Work on consistency!-

Now It's Clear "I OWNED THIS LAME" With "A VERSE OF PAIN" Ya Deaths "SIMPLE AN PLAIN" Next Time Better Not "MENTION MY NAME" (K.O.S), But Now I'll Nail A "Shovel To Your Back" Then Knock You Down To Let You *DIG YOUR OWN GRAVE!*
-This was all over the place, nonetheless I still understood it kiddo.-

Overall, I wasn't impressed by either of your verses. Ah probably typed his shit up with the quickness. And KOS just needs to elevate in a few categories and what not. ASP definitely was more creative and consistent, but not by much. KOS, work on your structure and punchlines kid. MVGT- Ah Swuh Pwn

[.:SYLNC:.]

Punches: asp
Complexity: asp
Multies: asp
Metas: asp
Entertainment: asp
Creativity: asp
Personals: asp
Structure: tie
Flow: tie
Closer: asp

for the most part i agree wit phax. kos just needs to elevate in a few places and he can be real nice

[SiN]

Punches: asp
Complexity: asp
Multies: both kinda weak
Metas: asp
Entertainment: asp
Creativity: asp
Personals: asp
Structure: tie
Flow: tie
Closer: asp
cats dont lie vote ASP....KOS you need to make you more clean to get your point across better....and if trynna beat ASP you gotta beat without question or you won't get votes here...even then you might not get them...lol

[Dispution]

Ah Swuh Pwn KO's KingOfSparta.