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Old 11-18-2017, 08:39 PM   #1
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5 bars i guess.
due jan 1, 2018

check, just kidding about jan 1, lets drop in a few days.

@TGO verse already submitted, it's hidden.

@Felipe Gannon can unhide my verse now.

voted for the ich thought i already posted hmm

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you're a good dad, I bet your daughter's gracious....you'll be tucking your kids in when they get married and have some of their own... no md but you offer patients! If you like coffee, you can do some proper drinking, especially with all the mugs you got for fathers day gifts!

When you're a papaw, that'll be shitty & a hard gig bud... I'm sure you'll be tickled to death, & you'll still be pretty and a partial stud....

But there's one thing every grandpa must learn..

Son Learns 52 Card Pickup - YouTube

so here's a tutorial on how to play fifty two card pick up!




Me & you bro.. my goodness that's a god submission... we'll stomp these bitches and stop the critics, I got a present for you, I put it in your stocking for christmas, you'll prolly be shocked when you get it, it's a shield vest, now lets start triple power bombing competition!

it's all about flowers & rainbows, you're too coo for a leather sofa, so I'll invite you to my house for some gaming, I got the nintendo 64 on deck, & an extra controller! We can recite your bars while the game loads, or atleast a few I keep in a folder!....

You'll prolly cheat playing mario cart, and bump my elbow... but that would be one heck of a boner!!!!




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I'm sorry you have a record, I would have helped you plan a jail break, I'll tattoo the escape route on my chest, right next to your swell face! but having tgo locked up with you is 1 helluva fail safe... so why try to break out of the clink? when this dude is your cell mate!

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Vs Diasick aka @Cooper Smithsonian aka Scott Akers aka Donald

Dude...The fact that you didn't beat Kris is Totally Bunk! Must've been voters Holding a Grudge!
Cuz I mean you changed your name to to Donald for a little Over a Month! ....
And that's why most people Voted for Trump!

You're doper than Eight Somas! And plus you're a Great Voter!
I just hope you never get political, Coop...cuz it would be a Take Over!

Homie has like half a dozen bitches on his dick...Cuddle?! Nah he chucks her dueces as he's Sliding his Pants On!
His Style would be Cramped Wrong. He likes being a single, Di...Never know which of his six Sides he could Land On!

Any ways Scott...Comparing you to me? Just wouldn't be Fair, Would It ? I mean...compared to Akers....I measure up like Square Footage!
And that's a fact, Pal.
The amount of Punch you Pack? Wow!! In battles all we see is Scott land shots...Every battles like a Pub in Glasgow!

Every time I read one of your verses?

I can't Manage the Joy! My girl heard Dia was"packing" then saw him pitching a tent, now she's tryna' Camp on his Groin!
We all know he's gangster..and keeps the Cannon Employed! So we'll see "Di press Gold" and I'll wind up "facin' the metal" like he was Stamping a Coin!
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Okay i gotta give it too TGO n heres why n SCOTT? AKERS? WTF i have Akers in my family


I thought every bar was pretty good i had a hard time choosing
Coopers 1st bar kinda lost focus n the img counter acted his love spree almost a sneak diss , still battle mode had a better flow then tgo tho but Tgo got his compliment across
Good dad < Your my president metaphor im judging bar 4 bar and and as a whole summation 1st bars.

2nd bar
TGo's kept the government theme but a bit over some heads but again the punch in takeover gave dia all his compliment power dia had another great flow but he should exaggerate instead of partial stud / Granpa hot as Fuck lol the 52 card pickup would fit too but it just coulda been better


3rd Tgos was pretty good but Dia made me wanna powerbomb an old lady it felt so good lol tgo kinda dissed his loyalty for not being faithful (Im in depth af lol) dia took 3rd


4th dia yo thats good af TGO the bar nice but you gave him some liquid free shots but u call him pal coulda bowd down he complimented you till he had a boner bro(Literally laughin)

5th bar..... Paper thin.... TGO risked it with a metaphor kinda like" I dont wanna win im outtie" In 8 mile his last bar saying u already won but kept it nice gave him a big dick bitches gold n the word play was bomb Dia that Tattoo part made me laugh reminds me of steve 0 's tattoo but the ending punch coulda been better the tone of it is double edged.? Its hard 2 word that.


You're no rookies this was dope good flows hot bars but TGO kept it consistent compliments but Ill laugh about the 4th bar from Dia that shit was fire lol
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you're a good dad, I bet your daughter's gracious....you'll be tucking your kids in when they get married and have some of their own... no md but you offer patients! If you like coffee, you can do some proper drinking, especially with all the mugs you got for fathers day gifts!

this was alright but a bit light in the creativity department and the entertainment department so I was expecting a little more on the compliment I guess

When you're a papaw, that'll be shitty & a hard gig bud... I'm sure you'll be tickled to death, & you'll still be pretty and a partial stud....
But there's one thing every grandpa must learn.
so here's a tutorial on how to play fifty two card pick up!

I mean yo called him a stud and prety but I didn't really get too much with the card idea

Me & you bro.. my goodness that's a god submission... we'll stomp these bitches and stop the critics, I got a present for you, I put it in your stocking for christmas, you'll prolly be shocked when you get it, it's a shield vest, now lets start triple power bombing competition!

Maybe I'm going into this battle with the wrong thoughts but for what I'm lookin for this isn't really meetin my idea for this battle when it comes tothe compliments. They are sorta there but not really something to boast about. I liked Evil's appoach to this battle and the Koolaid line he used. thats what I look for outta these types of battles so I'm a bit let down at this point as it only half way feels like compliments

it's all about flowers & rainbows, you're too coo for a leather sofa, so I'll invite you to my house for some gaming, I got the nintendo 64 on deck, & an extra controller! We can recite your bars while the game loads, or atleast a few I keep in a folder!....
You'll prolly cheat playing mario cart, and bump my elbow... but that would be one heck of a boner!!!!

LOL this was weird but so far your best

I'm sorry you have a record, I would have helped you plan a jail break, I'll tattoo the escape route on my chest, right next to your swell face! but having tgo locked up with you is 1 helluva fail safe... so why try to break out of the clink? when this dude is your cell mate!

LOL ok you picked it up in the final 2 bars in a big way. Good stuff here yet again to follow up on the previous



Dude...The fact that you didn't beat Kris is Totally Bunk! Must've been voters Holding a Grudge!
Cuz I mean you changed your name to to Donald for a little Over a Month! ....
And that's why most people Voted for Trump!

LOL I liked the personal and swap on this

You're doper than Eight Somas! And plus you're a Great Voter!
I just hope you never get political, Coop...cuz it would be a Take Over!

Wasn't really wild about this, I liked how it started but the effort felt flat in the second line

Homie has like half a dozen bitches on his dick...Cuddle?! Nah he chucks her dueces as he's Sliding his Pants On!
His Style would be Cramped Wrong. He likes being a single, Di...Never know which of his six Sides he could Land On!

I think the wording may get lost on people as I had to check it myself and nearly missed it but creative

Any ways Scott...Comparing you to me? Just wouldn't be Fair, Would It ? I mean...compared to Akers....I measure up like Square Footage!
And that's a fact, Pal.
The amount of Punch you Pack? Wow!! In battles all we see is Scott land shots...Every battles like a Pub in Glasgow!

I would've flopped these 2 around. Akers line was real nice flip to comp, the pub/shots was on the played side but that first line was great!

Every time I read one of your verses?
I can't Manage the Joy! My girl heard Dia was"packing" then saw him pitching a tent, now she's tryna' Camp on his Groin!
We all know he's gangster..and keeps the Cannon Employed! So we'll see "Di press Gold" and I'll wind up "facin' the metal" like he was Stamping a Coin!

LOL great bar!

This was close but for me it came down to TGO was more consistent in his verse. I don't know if Coop really got into it until the last 2 bars. The other 3 bars he had before his last two just didn't seem that fresh, great, or comping as much as I would've liked. On the flip TGO was really crisp with the wordplay, he was witty, funny with the quips, I liked his ideas, the Aker line was probably the best on both sides. Only thing he could've done different was swap that pubs line out with something fresher. Everything else was pretty damn good and entertainin. Both did really well but I felt like TGO went 4 bars of good material, I didn't like his 2nd. Coop was kinda just floating around and hanging around until the final 2 bars where he really turned it up. But I think too late at this point but in the end had TGO takin this in a good battle but pretty clear TGO was on top
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Compliment battles can be pretty gay on here.


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Bar 1 - "you'll be tucking your kids in when they get married"...... "And have some of their own"..... lol the wording of that is just... so off. The bar/punch (?) is flat as well. Poor wording and no wit. Didn't like this.

Bar 2 - Again, not really saying anything. Didn't care for the first part. Syllable rhymes are... off. Don't even know why you're trying to cram 7-syllable rhymes in. Cut it down and you'll find more things that rhyme, resulting in more angles you could take. The final line was flat again. The bar was about him being a "grandpa", and the video is of a son and father lol just breaks the connection instantly.

Bar 3 - Compliment battles are pretty much about back-handed compliments. At least the good ones, in my opinion. This bar is just... talking about doing an activity with each other. The multis are off again, which just kills the flow.

Bar 4 - Speechless.

Bar 5 - I mean, the first part doesn't even make sense. You need to focus on the actual words you're using. You're in the past tense one minute, present the next, etc. You went from talking about him previously being in jail (past tense, he's no longer there), to you saying you'll tattoo a plan. Even when describing that, you said you'll tattoo the escape route on YOUR chest, right next to HIS swell face? like, what? If you're all over the place, it doesn't have a good impact on the reader. I know what you're saying, but I shouldn't have to read between the lines to understand. The final punch was a better shot, though.


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Bar 1 - The flow is cool, as per. I didn't care for the bar overall, though.

Bar 2 - This is okay, I guesssss. Somas, though? Kind of a reach, unless I'm just not thinking of the right definition that you're using.

Bar 3 - Finally, a little creativity in this battle. I liked this bar pretty much all the way through.

Bar 4 - Okayyyy. I'm going to assume you're pronouncing "Wow" and "Glasgow", with the same sound that "Wow" is written with. Which is incorrect for Glasgow. It's pronounced Glaz-Go. So if you said "Punch you Pack, Wooooah", that'd have worked better with "Pub in Glaz-Gooooo". But, ay, you're a yank. I'm just pointing it out and not holding it against you. This was a cool bar.

Bar 5 - First part was kind of funny. Solid overall, but again, really coool floooooow.


Overall:

I guess I knew how this was going to turn out. I thought maybe Dia was pretty ill by now, but yeaaah. It baffles me you don't have the syllable rhyming down yet. You've been doing this year's. It's not only the sound that's off, but the count as well. Oh well, it's just a bit of fun, right? I basically said above what was okay and bad about the verses. Dia had one cool bar out of 5, TGO had 3 and 2 okay bars. Was a fun little read, but nothing special.

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you're a good dad, I bet your daughter's gracious....you'll be tucking your kids in when they get married and have some of their own... no md but you offer patients! If you like coffee, you can do some proper drinking, especially with all the mugs you got for fathers day gifts!

I feel like the slant rhyming here kid me of effects the flow. As far as compliments go I wasn't a big fan of what you were saying. The concepts weren't there in this bar.

When you're a papaw, that'll be shitty & a hard gig bud... I'm sure you'll be tickled to death, & you'll still be pretty and a partial stud....

But there's one thing every grandpa must learn..
so here's a tutorial on how to play fifty two card pick up!

forced multis af. Also I don't see much complimenting food my on, and what you are complimenting him on is for something that won't be for like 15-20 years at the soonest.

Me & you bro.. my goodness that's a god submission... we'll stomp these bitches and stop the critics, I got a present for you, I put it in your stocking for christmas, you'll prolly be shocked when you get it, it's a shield vest, now lets start triple power bombing competition!

How can two people execute a triple powerbomb? A little self hype mixed into your sparingly used compliment as well. Telling him you bought him a Christmas present isn't a compliment.

it's all about flowers & rainbows, you're too coo for a leather sofa, so I'll invite you to my house for some gaming, I got the nintendo 64 on deck, & an extra controller! We can recite your bars while the game loads, or atleast a few I keep in a folder!....
You'll prolly cheat playing mario cart, and bump my elbow... but that would be one heck of a boner!!!!

Saying he will cheat is the opposite of a compliment. Poorly worded , and I'm not sure what you mean with the boner aspect. Is his bumping your elbow giving you s boner? I feel like instead of complimenting you are writing bars about you being nice to him.

I'm sorry you have a record, I would have helped you plan a jail break, I'll tattoo the escape route on my chest, right next to your swell face! but having tgo locked up with you is 1 helluva fail safe... so why try to break out of the clink? when this dude is your cell mate!

This was a decent bar. Still had some wording issues, but the compliment came across better here. I feel like you talk to much about yourself tho.

Overall I wasn't a fan of this. Too much talk about yourself and what you would do for him. There were like two compliments in the entire verse and a lot of talk about how he makes you gay. No dope wordplay or anything to to set your bars apart here.


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Dude...The fact that you didn't beat Kris is Totally Bunk! Must've been voters Holding a Grudge!
Cuz I mean you changed your name to to Donald for a little Over a Month! ....
And that's why most people Voted for Trump!

i thought this was a little rushed, but the concept was pretty cool and the compliment worked.

You're doper than Eight Somas! And plus you're a Great Voter!
I just hope you never get political, Coop...cuz it would be a Take Over!

not feeling this. The compliments are there, but just feels lazy to me.

Homie has like half a dozen bitches on his dick...Cuddle?! Nah he chucks her dueces as he's Sliding his Pants On!
His Style would be Cramped Wrong. He likes being a single, Di...Never know which of his six Sides he could Land On!

This was pretty cool. The wordplay was dope and the fact that it tied together all through the bar was good. Best bar of the battle to this point.

Any ways Scott...Comparing you to me? Just wouldn't be Fair, Would It ? I mean...compared to Akers....I measure up like Square Footage!
And that's a fact, Pal.
The amount of Punch you Pack? Wow!! In battles all we see is Scott land shots...Every battles like a Pub in Glasgow!

Thought the first line was pretty dope. The simile was solid. Didn't like the second line. The wordplay was there it just didn't resonate with me.

Every time I read one of your verses?

I can't Manage the Joy! My girl heard Dia was"packing" then saw him pitching a tent, now she's tryna' Camp on his Groin!
We all know he's gangster..and keeps the Cannon Employed! So we'll see "Di press Gold" and I'll wind up "facin' the metal" like he was Stamping a Coin!

Decent closer. I like the fact that you degrade yourself to hype him up, it makes the compliments work better. Simile was good.

Overall this felt a bit like a lazy rushed verse from you. You had some great bars, but you also had some duds. The difference between you and Diasick was you complimented through out your verse and for that reason.


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