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Old 09-13-2017, 01:01 AM   #1
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As agreed on earlier

eight bars, topical.

@The Villain or @Disputer

Since he seems like he has pictures to spare, he should post a topical picture and well yeah Cody and I will battle.

Also Cody check in and all that
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I love kindle, you get swindled, by the Charlatan
Who brings romance like a Harlequin
Authorities hunting me down for years
From every city I leave a trail of tears
If you scared? You should be afraid my dears
Stay away from the magician who never reappears, cause yo

[Chorus]
Oh, oh no oh they got me on the run
Away from the sun, the sun the sun

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We Marvel at the fact of how anyone can be the just,
our super sanity becomes the Joker that believes in us,
and it's fooling you into seeing something we'd all run from,
the unknown mystique we try to capture with loved ones,
It's strange how strong our instinct to be a super hero is..
To prove that it's real, defying truth behind fearlessness,
and we seek something incredible -- reaching for cameras,
bleating with damage, each Sun in us gleaming like amethysts'
our soul portrays a hidden Batman embedded in each of us
all we see is the Flash, a quick reflex we leave in dusts,
one blink and it's always shrouded in those hypothetical's
NEWS channels seemingly seeking things I would never do,
they'll never admit it but our cities are plagued with violence,
crimes, tainted tyrants, saying they need a way to fight it..
all I do is sit and wonder, is this desire a one time fling?
what if I got a gift of thunder or justice in guns I bring?
Who knows... I ain't done a thing.
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I love kindle, you get swindled, by the Charlatan
Who brings romance like a Harlequin
Authorities hunting me down for years
From every city I leave a trail of tears
If you scared? You should be afraid my dears
Stay away from the magician who never reappears, cause yo

[Chorus]
Oh, oh no oh they got me on the run
Away from the sun, the sun the sun

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Old 09-13-2017, 05:16 PM   #5
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Tar colored fog blots out the sun, like poison choking its victims and robbing them of all life.
Even at night the stars are for not, none survived soaked in the powerful fumes clawed through bodies like the sharpest knife.
A booming city turned into a mass graveyard overnight.
Weeks before the looming threat of a new gas, said to be pestilence jarred, a instantaneous plight. One to make all defenses, all wars seem trite.
For one night, all fighting ceased the invaders pleased they combed over their wicked gains observing those they slain.
They ruined the land they claimed and choose their fate to reign over nothing more then a wasteland
Funny to think that while it only used once in hate, caused so much fear in the clans they never fought again.
Called "God's Hand" blasphemy if used by a mortal man

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[Today 09:02 PM] Disputer: If this is Faget by Korn, Ruvik, I will be angry.

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I love kindle, you get swindled, by the Charlatan
Who brings romance like a Harlequin
Authorities hunting me down for years
From every city I leave a trail of tears
If you scared? You should be afraid my dears
Stay away from the magician who never reappears, cause yo

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Oh, oh no oh they got me on the run
Away from the sun, the sun the sun

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[Today 09:02 PM] Disputer: If this is Faget by Korn, Ruvik, I will be angry.

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If I'm not mistaken you've already posted this drop before @cody Phoenix......kind of disappointed you didn't do something new. My biggest problem with this piece is that the story seems really brushed over, including the message. You reference superheroes but you don't fight into the meat of the message or meaning of the piece. The drop itself, while having solid technical ability, lacks the depth needed to really grasp the readers attention. I felt you just threw in the heroes (while being okay for references to previous lines) was just meant to fill a given topic or idea. I had trouble connecting fully with your story, largely due to the image having little to do with what you were talking about and also because I didn't feel what you were trying to convey. In technical aspects it's strong but for me personally I can't really connect to it.

I can't remember if you've also posted this drop before @Little Vam, but it seems familiar. Your problem is opposite of Cody's, I enjoyed the depth of your story and what it gave image wise. But the technical aspects are rather shakey. I definitely think you could've ironed them out more since line lengths got away from you stretching the bars out a lot more compared to others. I also think the multis could've been refined better, you need to watch the amount of syllables you put per line as it'll affect your flow. Overall, a good story imagery and depth wise, but Shakey mechanics.

Honestly, the deciding factor for this vote for me comes down to which one I enjoyed more. I've already seen Cody's and when I first saw it I thought it was okay but I wasn't thrilled about it, I was hoping to see something new (paper boats was a great drop) but was shown something you've already done before. Vammy I'm not sure if you've posted this before, but it's written like one of your older pieces mechanics wise. Vammys just felt a bit fresher to me and I was personally more captivated by the story than Cody's. So Vammy edged it out for me.

That being said, if Cody had done something newer I feel he could've taken it, Vammy your biggest problem is mechanics, without a well polished mechanical piece it can really hurt you for text topicals. You're always progressing it's just the only area you really struggle in. As for Cody I've seen him drop a lot better in the past (recently as well) and this was a recycled piece he's dropped once already before.

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[Today 09:02 PM] Disputer: If this is Faget by Korn, Ruvik, I will be angry.

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