Good Bye off UnGodly Mixtape

[Rey]

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[OphWhite]

Feeling the delivery a lot. flows flawless. Who's the nicest I is, That ship was illy. This whole track was insane all I can say for criticism is keep killin it and your good.

[Rey]

Thank you.

[Iphorill]

pretty dope. Flow was too solid with no slipping what-so-ever. I also loved the switches there, you presented several flow patterns in one joint, that's definitely a plus. Delivery was pro-like, it had all the needed components from energy to emotions. Lyrics were very well-written, lyricism was good, I liked the internals the most. Plus, the vocabs were there, and some of the multies were sick as hell too. Content was okay, nothing new or original, same ol' shit, but hey at least you're pretty good at it
I didn't like the beat, it was too noisy and had an intense commercial flavor.

keep it up man, you're good

[Tha Q]

quality sounds nice

I do, however, disagree with the above feed that your flow was flawless...With that fast-paced delivery at the start, I heard a couple loose parts...but, it's still pretty damn nice...period.


I'm finding it difficult to follow your lyrics though...there appears to be a lack of continuity to the lyrics...as if they're not going anywhere...just a random collection of words...needs focus there


Feelin the presence on the track though


I feel this track was hit and miss...great quality and presence...average lyrics


Overall, good though




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[Kremlin]

i didnt think i was gonna like tha beat frum tha beginnin..but when it kicked in it was much better..u rode it pretty well..liked tha fast paced an switch up..flow was pretty good to me..presence all around was pretty good..i like this track, prolly mah favorite ive heard..i think when its mixed/mastered like u want, shit will be that much better..liked tha lyrics..liked tha reason fa tha mics line..an sum other quotables in there..shit was pretty good, no lie..nyce work..

[Nietzsche]

Listened to it a couple times, never got around to feeding it. Good thing is I like listening to it each of those times. Really energy full track, sounds like your still developing your style, like the switch up, energy is good here, matched it pretty well with the beat. Flow is dope. I'm feeling the determination on this track, really shown through, if this is good bye, def will bring people back. Good track.

[murkules]

i feed this on another site
but anyway, this is still my favorite track so far that i've gotten a chance to hear off the mixtape, it's fire
gonna be dope

[Rey]

Word, good looks y'all.

[Serious Flo]

Im feelin the energy/delivery ... its def hype... suitable for the beat

Only thing I didnt like is there is No Chorus?!?!?!
A chorus woulda set this track off....
SO now instead of being a RADIO/SINGLE Material ...... its just a mixtape track
A good mixtape track none the less.... but you gotta realize ur single material and ur filler material ... this was single material ....