Drunken Freetyle - Am to Witty to be Pitty

[D.CoKid]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aib50rc9-Xg
This is a pure freestyle of the top of the dome, mind i was ussin my mates shitty acid rap mic. But if u stay patient and listen i found it quite funny listening back to it, some of the shit i raped abt is weird rappin of the dome.






links
http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/aud...tml#post298794
http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/aud...uick-16-a.html

[Myth]

.....No link to your track

[D.CoKid]

sorry abt that i just realised, the links there now thanks for lettin me know

[D.CoKid]

thanks links up now, am curious wht u all think

[Phila.Hypnotik]

ummm....i dunno what to think about this.....i cant really hear what ur sayin the quality is real bad......beat is cool for a freestyle jawn....hahah i think its cool tho when people try to this kinda of shit....does ur voice really sound like that hahah or did u fuck with it....4real i cant hear a fuckin word i been trin to....i dunno....good job homes good attempt up ur qualtiy ill give u real feed

[D.CoKid]

I understand the quality is pretty shit. Am not sure, i havnt fuck around with my voice it was my mates mic i think makin it sound like that. Maybe its only me who can actually understand it with me shit quailty; I dunno am just curious if any else can actually understand some of the rhymes in it. I think some of the rhymes i came up with of the dome was pretty awesome. such as ''I dont really care as long as i get there, as long as i've got a girl to rape; but wait mate, dont debate me. You wanna know why we relate cus her pupils dilate. All I wanna do is get her drunker, tie her up fuck her all over nd put her in the back of my boot of my car and rape her'' ....along them lines

[Nietzsche]

Quality yea, I agree needs to be better. Flow seemed okay for off the top, it's really hard to hear with the quality. Voice could just be mic, I would like to hear some real shit, this seemed like just spouting off shit. Which, I thought for a freestyle wasn't bad, you flowed in parts. There was some lines you went with what you were doing. Not bad, work on the quality.

[E$ODE]

damn accents always throw me off, still ain't got use to that yet!!!..

honestly dawg not really feelin' this, it is freestyle so I won't say to much..would like to hear something you wrote dawg..

keep doing ya thang tho!.

[murkules]

damn bro
usually i don't care about quality but wow, what's going on with it?

[Tha Q]

1st off, plz RTF on "Definition...of"...

http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/aud...ank-holla.html

^Thanks in advance...


Listening...vocal quality sounds very compressed and/or compromised...almost like you're rapping through a pay phone...up the quality there


Flow has no stops or control (like a Toyota Prius )...the cadence is almost non-existent...

lyrics difficult to decipher



ehhh


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