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02-10-2010, 11:44 AM
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| A Nobody  Join Date: Feb 2010
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|  shoulda done another verse or two, flow was pretty dope cept off at a few points, lyrics were pretty good...delivery fit the beat well, hook coulda been done a little cleaner/better but its pretty good as it is...id like to hear this as a full track |
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02-10-2010, 11:54 AM
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| A Nobody Join Date: Feb 2010
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| damn bro...shit was sick...beat was aight, i wasnt really feelin it, but your lyrics were crazy and the multies were on point, it was like tongue twisters...great drop bro, keep it up |
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02-12-2010, 12:27 AM
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| Assassin Join Date: Dec 2006
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| yo..this was koo..not really a fan ov tha beat but how u rocked it was nyce..i like tha switch up in tha delivery an ur lyrics to this make it nyce..couldve been mo clear wit tha vocals i thot tho..a lil short track, juss feels like it needs sumtin extra..or to me neway, cuz i was feelin it even widout carin fa tha beat, so thats always a good sign..lyrically shit on point no doubt..tha flow is consistent an nyce..id play this shit again tho, got a certain feel to it that makes u wanna play it over..to me neway..first time checkin ur music out an shit is pretty nyce..keep spittin, tha final version should be hot..
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