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07-02-2009, 06:05 PM
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| Is Breathing Hip Hop...  Join Date: May 2009 Location: Toronto Canada
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|  Have you Ever Ft. PhReShha & Mikey Lines feed: Freestyle of mine --Dedication-- ..Story Tellin' Track.. BIG UPS TO SHADOWVILLE.COM For The Beat.. Phreshha 1st Verse, Liberty 2nd Verse, Mikey Lines 3rd Verse.. SoundClick artist: E.Fresha - page with MP3 music downloads ppreciate the feed
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07-02-2009, 08:57 PM
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| beat is koo..SHADOWVILLE got sum good shit.. 1st guy..quality could use work..lyrikz are koo, flow is iight.. u..i thot u couldve rode the beat a lil better, sounds like u didnt really get into it u know until tha end?? but lyrikz koo, flow good.. 3rd guy..story koo, lyrikz koo, flow not bad.. liked tha last guy tha most tho..good work tho by yall..koo track..
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07-03-2009, 02:24 PM
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| Shit was pretty cool first verse, felt like it was pretty there, yea I also think you could have road the beat better, work on flow third guy was pretty cool, like his flow and story, keep this shit up. Wasn't bad, just work on flow.
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07-03-2009, 11:03 PM
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| this was cool, really dig that beat, its simple - but it works well - flows comin through pretty nice - production sounds fair. think it woulda been cool to toss somethin in between the sample, but its all good first verse was my favorite pretty nice cut here return the favor please Antisocial |
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07-04-2009, 05:13 AM
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| I didn't like the hook; heard it so many variations of it before and voice is annoying. The 1st person had mic presence, but failed to stay on the beat, until the very end, where it actually sounded dope. The 2nd, liberty, had good content, but your quality made it hard to understand some of your lines. The last person had the best delivery and quality. However, the content was consistently good throughout. Liberty, your quality is letting you down; your potential stems from you being able to stay on the beat and produce good lyrics. You need to fix the quality part. I think the distortion comes from you: (1) rapping to close to the mic, or (2) rapping to loud. Maybe, as i do, try make the mic head face towards your chin and rap above the mic. Do not rap into the mic, rather rap away from it. Maybe that could help |
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07-05-2009, 11:58 AM
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| I thought quality was consistent for all three, sounded mostly the same, I didn't have a problem understanding shit. First guy, he had the emotion, but his lyrics were not that great. Flow was ok, felt it could've been better. Liberty, I agree that it sounded like you really didn't get into your verse until you hit the second half and from there it got better. Good flow, lyrics for this track work and were cool, delivery was there, emotion sounded there. Just could've switched it up a little bit is all. Good work though Last guy, he had a nice story, just could've did a little more on his delivery, but everything else sounded good to me. A little basic, but not a big problem Yeah yall should've done something with the sample, would've made it a little more interesting. But overall this is a cool track, I liked it, good work Liberty
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