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Old 01-12-2018, 05:09 PM   #1
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Old 01-12-2018, 05:11 PM   #2
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First of all, your vocal tag kicks ass. Love it.

Man, the vibe on this one is fire. Had me interested right away. The drums come in quite nicely. I always like to approach trap beats with fast, lyrical bars, and this would deserve such.

The little secondary melody that comes in seems to be tad off, maybe it's just me. It doesn't throw off the verse too bad. The hook is a little interesting. I would say maybe tweak it a bit so it doesn't throw off the tone of the verse too much. Then again, I DO like the variation too. You could go either way there.

When the verse comes in, it has me nodding my head again. That wavy sample is pretty dope. This is definitely workable man, I would just tweak your secondary melodies a bit.

This is fire otherwise. Keep it up!
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