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Old 09-12-2017, 05:12 PM   #1
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Old 09-12-2017, 05:13 PM   #2
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Yo, this is pretty chill right here. I was digging the smooth jazzy vibe from the beginning. I thought the laid-back vocal delivery complimented the punchlines you brought very well.

With that said, I did feel like some of the lines felt "crammed," meaning there were a couple spots where the flow became sped up or choppy in a rather jarring fashion to make up for lack of bar space on the beat or to fill space by stretching out the lines with pauses and such.

Nevertheless, I wouldn't call it bad, just a minor blemish that could be improved on, and it definitely doesn't break the song.

I thought this was solid and easy to vibe to, and I loved the positive message about cutting off fake people to focus on yourself and whatnot. Great job.
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Old 09-14-2017, 11:38 AM   #4
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Solid picture to go for this... I like the beat on this one with the jazzy feels. Reminds me a lot of something that @EvilMindeD would produce. You also remind me a bit of @Royal-T with the delivery. Would like to hear you two collaborate one day. That said, I like the lyrics that you bring to the table. They interest me, they are not like a lot of things out there and so that keeps me invested to hear what you're going to say next. I could quote quite a few lyrics in this. Body and soul part was solid. Wallet line. Bragging style done in a different way with some comedy thrown in here and there. Your delivery isn't too bad, would've liked to hear some more switching it up. Overall I liked the presentation, something unique that you bring to the table that makes me want to listen. I enjoyed this, just some minor things to look at, in my opinion. But still solid work.
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this has such a smooth like 90's hip hop r&b/hip hop nate dogg vibe to it lol i really like it the sit back and relax nature of it, jazziness of it all. one thing i think you could consider is adding some of the rhythm to your delivery that you show in like certain parts of the verse, i don't really mind the straight shooting/talking to you of the track but when you added in the rhythms like at 45 sec mark i really liked that, made it sound so cool! wordplay and lyricism used was really a great touch to make your points connect. seems like this is based on things that happened to you but without getting super details on the ongoings. the vibe of the track was so smooth it was hard to not enjoy, thanks for the listen!
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I liked this @TheMagician ... Really awesome! Laid back, chill af .... Really makes me wonder about how our collab's will turn out. This really was jazzy, I like the flow you got on this, too. Lyrically I think you can improve here and there, mostly just a few word cuts here and there and what not. I dig this whole joint tho.... Not much to critique at the moment, from me at least.
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Sounds like Scarface-I seen a man die
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steady throwing banana peels but you the one thats really slippin..i was feeling that shit right there..at first i thought the track needed more energy but i think after listening to the whole thing you meant for it to sound monotone to a point..the hook was dope like that old vibe it had to it. lyrics was nice overall this was a dope track
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so happy to see a thread for this one, Orpheus! that's not to say i think any of your other stuff isn't up to snuff, but this is definitely my favorite track you have up currently.

everything about this one is great in my opinion. i absolutely love your flow here; you ride this beat perfectly (and as someone else mentioned, i too got a Scarface vibe first time i heard this, haha). and the chorus part is really cool as well. it's one of those hooks that truly hooks the listener in and stays in your head. the mix is also very good, which makes the listen even more enjoyable.

great work all around! i hope to hear more dope stuff from you in the very near future.

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beat starts out dope
vocals are a bit loud, maybe like +3DB too high
lyrics are pretty dope but the vocal being so loud is exaggerating the flaws

everything was dope man. i like this a lot. I played the whole way and think the only flaw is that level. shit is slappin!
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