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Old 09-12-2017, 04:12 PM   #1
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Yo, this is pretty chill right here. I was digging the smooth jazzy vibe from the beginning. I thought the laid-back vocal delivery complimented the punchlines you brought very well.

With that said, I did feel like some of the lines felt "crammed," meaning there were a couple spots where the flow became sped up or choppy in a rather jarring fashion to make up for lack of bar space on the beat or to fill space by stretching out the lines with pauses and such.

Nevertheless, I wouldn't call it bad, just a minor blemish that could be improved on, and it definitely doesn't break the song.

I thought this was solid and easy to vibe to, and I loved the positive message about cutting off fake people to focus on yourself and whatnot. Great job.
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Solid picture to go for this... I like the beat on this one with the jazzy feels. Reminds me a lot of something that @EvilMindeD would produce. You also remind me a bit of @Royal-T with the delivery. Would like to hear you two collaborate one day. That said, I like the lyrics that you bring to the table. They interest me, they are not like a lot of things out there and so that keeps me invested to hear what you're going to say next. I could quote quite a few lyrics in this. Body and soul part was solid. Wallet line. Bragging style done in a different way with some comedy thrown in here and there. Your delivery isn't too bad, would've liked to hear some more switching it up. Overall I liked the presentation, something unique that you bring to the table that makes me want to listen. I enjoyed this, just some minor things to look at, in my opinion. But still solid work.
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