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Old 04-20-2017, 08:30 PM   #1
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What's up, everybody?!

Just released a brand new track featuring a number of my brothers from Cypher Circuit: emcees Ruuu (verse 2) and Mikey Bonez (verse 3), and produced by 17CVNDLES.

Took some time trying to get this polished up, so I'll be really grateful to hear what you think.

Thanks in advance for giving it a listen!

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If anybody has a chance to take a listen, your feedback would mean a lot to me, good, bad, or ugly.

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I think this is mixed really well. It's kinda not my type of song but it's still done well.. Didn't like the first verse.. Just talking about consciousness without saying anything conscious lol The second verse was hot... third verse was cool too

Overall this wasn't my type of song but it was done very well. Keep at it.
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Didnt like that first verse, flow is pretty awful and the lyrics are kinda trash. Second and third guy sound so much more legitimate. They sound like they been doin this for a while and you just recently picked up a mic a few months ago. That being said no one really said anything, i hate these kind of tracks cause thats what usually ends up happening. Id focus on flow and getting comfortable on the mic, sounds like your forcing it a bit.
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not ssure if i dig the 1st verse the flow needs work although the energy and confidence is right! .. the 2nd verse flow is more on beat than the 1st, II dont like the chorus as it's a flow problem again, sounds too quick.. the 3rd verse is good too... it's just the 1st guy, kind of ruins the track as it's the first thing we hear.. Keep up the grind, Rtf? peace http://www.rap-royalty.com/forum/alb...-new-post.html
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sup Shawn? nice to see you dropping brother. very hard feel to this out the gate - your tone, the piano, and simple drum pattern coming thru hard. i know you fuck with your sound a lot and like to switch things up, and your probably most comfortable behind this type of beat cause you were confident with the delivery. I thought your flow for the majority of the verse was good, don't really agree with the above posters there. maybe a slight slip at the beginning, but flow reminded me of some beastie boys with how the had that harsh cadence at the beginning word of the line

i liked Mikey Bonez's verse better than Ruuu's, whose was the most dull of the three. maybe it was his lax voice and it lacked the energy of you and Bonez. I actually enjoyed Bonez's verse the most. very cool sound he has and i liked the content in his words.

not a bad listen at all dude. stay up
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