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Old 02-10-2010, 05:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
iPhySix
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hmm well,

Look Bro Its Human Nature 2 Fear-Better… Im A Hard Hitter, A Heavy Weight And This Queers-Feather …One Verse Will “Force U A L” Like Teenage High School Peer-Pressure//
(L=Loss And Joint)

In Comparisin He’s Raps-Weak … So If You On A Battle Rap-Streak?...Then “I’ll End The Run” Worser Then Olympic ATHLETES Carryin Injuries At A Track-Meet//


ok so you had some solid flow going on ..nothing to wow me or stand out but Your punches were set up nice & the multis were pretty much on point..all in all a great foundation & decent concepts. iFelt like your wordplay could've been improved at places ...Worser? lol j.k over all A Solid Verse with pretty much everything your supposed to have in a battle..name play all that.
also iFelt you started out fairly good but didnt finish strong..iWasnt feeling the finisher at all..



I'm phat like cattle, you? fucking adolesence, chronic lame..
In this battle, it's always Knuckes-Second like Sonic Games!

murder by cell phone? woulda though the way they know I text ya
fuck this dude ...More of a meaningless character than the role of extras...


only 2 lines iFelt..strong flow, great mulits ..Solid Punches..

iWasnt really feeling the third line..
the last two were pretty solid as well but over all I'm just feelin knuklez a bit more in this battle..but I'd say it was fairly close ....
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