yea man..u not bad..tha topik has been done a lott, i think u could expand or go mo in depth this would be much better..its very basik tho, simple..i think u could be mo original wit it, write it out a lil mo complex, by addin different elements..but its ok..looks like an audio verse to me as well..stick around ull elevate no doubt..juss takes sum practice an work..but it wasnt bad, juss didnt have a lott goin on here.. |