You Got A Verse To Drop? .. No Doubt Its Bad!, And If He Thinks Ah Str8 Choked? Doubt This Lad
He Reminds Me Of `Trains Wit Another Engine As The Kaboose`, The Way He "Blow'n Smoke Out His Ass"
-Eh. This was okay I guess, not really hitting that hard for me dude.-
I Can Tell Your Style Played Out Like Barnie Fife, Probably An `Old Herb`.. Watch As This Little Dawgs `Barking Dies`
But The Truth Is, Nobody Even See's Him `Land Punches`, But Thats The `Natural Form` In `SparRing Fights`
-This was pretty cool. Put together well with some word/nameplay.-
Im The Manican Murker! .. I Kill Fakes, You Could Be Play'n Cards Wit Death .. And Still Would'nt Deal Fate
Your A Pizza Crap.. Imma Chuck E-Cheese At Him.. Cuz `KOS` Means Nothing To Me & Like Bill Gates
-Hmmph. I don't know, some of this was confusing to me. But I see where you were going with it.-
Since You Drop With "WEAK DEFENSES" I'll Leave Ya "TEXT IN ASHES" For Messing "WITH THIS MANSCRIPT" Cleaving Axes "IN YOUR CHEST THEN" Show You The Meaning Of Spartan's "Ripped Abs" When I Jump Rope *YOUR INTESTINES!*
-This was a cool opener, but also wasn't hitting that hard for me.-
Beware When "THE SWORDS CLASHES" Cause I'm Leaving "ALL HEADS BASHED IN", Now For Talking About Playing "CARDS IN VERSES" I'll Leave Your "CHEST IN GASHES" After I "Cut" Him Like Playing Spades *ON YOUR CHEST BITCH!*
-I dont know, I felt like you could've done alot more with this bar. Work on consistency!-
Now It's Clear "I OWNED THIS LAME" With "A VERSE OF PAIN" Ya Deaths "SIMPLE AN PLAIN" Next Time Better Not "MENTION MY NAME" (K.O.S), But Now I'll Nail A "Shovel To Your Back" Then Knock You Down To Let You *DIG YOUR OWN GRAVE!*
-This was all over the place, nonetheless I still understood it kiddo.-
Overall, I wasn't impressed by either of your verses. Ah probably typed his shit up with the quickness. And KOS just needs to elevate in a few categories and what not. ASP definitely was more creative and consistent, but not by much. KOS, work on your structure and punchlines kid. MVGT- Ah Swuh Pwn |